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policy</image:caption></image:image><lastmod>2026-01-27T18:19:30+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2026/01/21/readers-only-see-the-finished-product/</loc><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2026/01/img_20260121_082018285.jpg</image:loc><image:title>IMG_20260121_082018285</image:title></image:image><lastmod>2026-01-20T19:27:51+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2026/01/14/finding-my-2026-rhythm/</loc><lastmod>2026-01-13T19:25:15+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2026/01/07/2025-travel-and-adventure-reading-round-up/</loc><lastmod>2026-01-06T19:21:53+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/12/17/merry-christmas-happy-holidays/</loc><lastmod>2025-12-16T19:09:12+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/11/26/are-you-a-writer/</loc><lastmod>2025-11-25T19:44:17+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/11/19/there-are-more-important-things-to-argue-about-than-commas/</loc><lastmod>2025-11-18T18:50:11+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/11/12/pull-your-writing-out-of-the-toddler-zone/</loc><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/11/newsletter-email-header.png</image:loc><image:title>Newsletter 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Writing</image:title></image:image><lastmod>2025-10-30T18:52:38+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>weekly</changefreq><priority>0.6</priority></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/cv/</loc><lastmod>2025-10-28T21:37:21+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>weekly</changefreq><priority>0.6</priority></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/10/29/goals-and-an-important-chicken-update/</loc><lastmod>2025-10-28T18:53:46+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/10/22/chickens-and-trust/</loc><lastmod>2025-10-21T18:45:00+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/testimonials/</loc><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/when-the-smoke-clears-cover.webp</image:loc><image:title>When the smoke clears cover</image:title><image:caption>When the Smoke Clears: Voices From the Heart of Black Saturday,
by Rick Wall and Cameron Caine</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/my-summer-of-cricket-cover.webp</image:loc><image:title>My Summer of Cricket cover</image:title><image:caption>My Summer of Cricket: Three Tests, One Fan and Decades of Stories, by Nikhil Kulkarni</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/travels-with-tracy-cover.webp</image:loc><image:title>Travels with Tracy cover</image:title><image:caption>Travels with Tracy: Tales from a Midlife Gap Year, by Andrew Pettifer</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/08/talking-of-michelangelo.jpg</image:loc><image:title>Talking of Michelangelo</image:title><image:caption>Talking of Michelangelo, by John Harry​</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/08/feces-navidad.jpg</image:loc><image:title>Feces Navidad</image:title><image:caption>Feces Navidad, by Matthew Tolzmann</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2024/10/cadiz-web.jpg</image:loc><image:title>Cadiz-web</image:title><image:caption>
Cádiz: The Story of Europe’s Oldest City, by Helen Crisp and Jules Stewart

We are grateful to Deborah Shaw, whose highly professional copy editing saved us potential embarrassment in many instances. Her sharp-eyed attention to detail revealed numerous literals and errors that had escaped us. Deborah’s prompt work and clear comments made the editing process easy for us.</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2023/11/man-made.jpg</image:loc><image:title>man-made</image:title><image:caption> Man. Made. by Ian Austin  My books are weighted towards detailed Police procedures. Deborah’s academic editing background is well suited to my requirements. Her work comes towards the end of my writing process when printers and publishers require deadlines. Deborah is always timely. It’s a pleasurable aspect of my writing working with her because it’s always a time of improvement with no stress. Deborah’s proofreading is a valuable tool in my writing arsenal. Every book we’ve worked on, she’s provided great manuscript improvement advice. Her ideas are clever and in keeping with my style. I have used her amendments in the final texts multiple times</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2023/05/via-legio.jpg</image:loc><image:title>via-legio</image:title><image:caption>
Via Legio series
by Charles Edward Williams

As an emergent author of historical fiction, I’ve welcomed the professional and guiding hand of Deborah Shaw, whose exacting oversight and gift for shaping and sculpting a rough draft storyline has inevitably led to highly burnished and polished outcomes. I’ve no doubt that her expertise and assistance elevates an author’s manuscript to the highest professional standards. Thoroughly recommended.</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2022/10/octd.jpg</image:loc><image:title>octd</image:title><image:caption>
Out Come the Dogs
by Stu Tripney

If there’s one other person who’s so involved with my books, it’s Deborah, my editor and so much more. Every time I give her a new manuscript I feel sorry for her. I say, ‘Get out your flamethrower, angle grinder and chainsaw and get to work.’ And she does, in such a remarkable way. Without blinking! I’m not sure how she does it. But Deborah does, and very very well.</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2021/10/dunedin-walks.jpg</image:loc><image:title>Dunedin Walks</image:title></image:image><lastmod>2025-10-20T19:41:22+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>weekly</changefreq><priority>0.6</priority></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/10/15/what-book-editing-looks-like-behind-the-scenes/</loc><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/image-4.png</image:loc><image:title>This had me laughing! It’s such an Aussie way of speaking and works really well.</image:title><image:caption>This had me laughing! It’s such an Aussie way of speaking and works really well.</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/image-4-1.png</image:loc><image:title>Love the scene you build here. I can picture the house and chaos and smells and the radio in the background</image:title><image:caption>Love the scene you build here. I can picture the house and chaos and smells and the radio in the background</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/image-1.png</image:loc><image:title>Checking the number. Here we have fifty, but in the previous paragraph there are thirty (“There were about thirty people…”). Could you check and update?</image:title><image:caption>Checking the number. Here we have fifty, but in the previous paragraph there are thirty (“There were about thirty people…”). Could you check and update?</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/image.png</image:loc><image:title>licence</image:title><image:caption>Oxford Dictionaries’ definition of “licence”. Great example of UK and US spelling differences throwing all sorts of chaos around.</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/image-2.png</image:loc><image:title>A slight change here could help make this sentence clearer. Does this work?</image:title><image:caption>A slight change here could help make this sentence clearer. Does this work?</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/image-3.png</image:loc><image:title>Could you use a more precise word here? “Things” can be vague, so a stronger word will build the scene more. Some options:</image:title><image:caption>Could you use a more precise word here? “Things” can be vague, so a stronger word will build the scene more. Some options:</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/image-3-1.png</image:loc><image:title>Google search of “height of Cho Oyu -ai.”</image:title><image:caption>Google search of “height of Cho Oyu -ai.” The “-ai” bit cuts out the AI slop results.</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/image.jpeg</image:loc><image:title>Deborah in her 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Kepler</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2024/05/img_5422-778399242-e1716243709122.jpg</image:loc><image:title>Mueller hut with Mt Sefton</image:title><image:caption>Mueller hut with Mt Sefton</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2024/05/img_6577-806333209-e1716243867554.jpg</image:loc><image:title>Huxley Forks Hut</image:title><image:caption>Huxley Forks Hut</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2024/05/img_20161029_154301-1069248548-e1716243914631.jpg</image:loc><image:title>Big Hut</image:title><image:caption>Big Hut</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2024/05/img_5101-2207358937-e1716243637324.jpg</image:loc><image:title>French Ridge Hut. 1480 m above sea level.</image:title><image:caption>French Ridge Hut. 1480 m above sea level.</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2024/05/1-2212294583-e1716241571389.png</image:loc><image:title>Right arrow 2</image:title><image:caption>Arrowing pointing right</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2024/05/2-450215437-e1716241415980.png</image:loc><image:title>arrow pointing right</image:title><image:caption>arrow pointing right</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2023/02/img_5176.jpg</image:loc><image:title>Mt Barff, and me.</image:title><image:caption>Mt Barff, and me.</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2023/02/img_5458-1.jpg</image:loc><image:title>img_5458-1</image:title></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2023/02/img_5458.jpg</image:loc><image:title>img_5458</image:title></image:image><lastmod>2025-09-25T22:27:06+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>weekly</changefreq><priority>0.6</priority></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/09/24/lets-grab-coffee/</loc><lastmod>2025-09-23T19:36:15+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/06/04/see-you-in-wanaka/</loc><lastmod>2025-09-15T01:04:24+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/thesis-editing/</loc><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/01/img_20250126_103935248_ae.jpg</image:loc><image:title>IMG_20250126_103935248_AE</image:title><image:caption>CMOS 18 and 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Road</image:caption></image:image><lastmod>2025-09-11T01:52:20+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/09/10/a-blood-moon-and-giving-feedback/</loc><lastmod>2025-09-09T20:24:32+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/09/03/hows-your-writing-going/</loc><lastmod>2025-09-02T19:28:16+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/08/27/the-joy-of-maps-and-following-along/</loc><lastmod>2025-08-26T19:16:21+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/guides/</loc><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/08/how-to-use-track-changes-thumbnail.png</image:loc><image:title>how to use track changes 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cracking winter morning at the Wanaka lakeside.</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/06/img_20250622_165622705.jpg</image:loc><image:title>IMG_20250622_165622705</image:title></image:image><lastmod>2025-06-25T19:49:52+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/06/18/can-you-help-me-test-this-proofreading-guide/</loc><lastmod>2025-06-17T19:13:39+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/06/11/five-reasons-i-love-adventure-books/</loc><lastmod>2025-06-10T20:01:19+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/evaluation/</loc><lastmod>2025-05-29T20:13:55+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>weekly</changefreq><priority>0.6</priority></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/05/28/easy-wins-for-your-writing/</loc><lastmod>2025-05-27T19:58:56+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/05/21/how-many-drafts-do-you-have/</loc><lastmod>2025-05-19T19:21:37+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/05/14/metaphorical-pickles/</loc><lastmod>2025-05-13T20:04:42+00:00</lastmod><changefreq>monthly</changefreq></url><url><loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/2025/05/07/being-intentional-with-your-words/</loc><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/05/img_20250503_121844307_ae-1.jpg</image:loc><image:title>IMG_20250503_121844307_AE</image:title></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/05/arrowtown_map.jpg</image:loc><image:title>arrowtown_map</image:title></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2025/05/img_20250503_121844307_ae.jpg</image:loc><image:title>IMG_20250503_121844307_AE</image:title><image:caption>Sawpit 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small mountain climbed! We are at about half the height of Mt Cook.</image:title><image:caption>A small mountain climbed! We are at about half the height of Mt Cook.</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2024/05/img_5086.jpg</image:loc><image:title>Still smiling, somehow. Must have been before my second breakdown.</image:title><image:caption>Still smiling, somehow. Must have been before my second breakdown.</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2024/05/img_5768.jpg</image:loc><image:title>img_5768</image:title><image:caption>Well, don't I look shagged out. We had covered 7.5 km by this stage, and there was a lot of up and down. We stopped for a break at the ABC Cave.</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2024/05/img_6683.jpg</image:loc><image:title>img_6683</image:title></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2024/05/img_66981.jpg</image:loc><image:title>Day two! wear all the rain gear.</image:title><image:caption>Day two! wear all the rain gear.</image:caption></image:image><image:image><image:loc>https://deborahshaw.co.nz/wp-content/uploads/2024/05/img_5290.jpg</image:loc><image:title>Made it to Sealy Tarns! Mt Cook in the background.</image:title><image:caption>Made it to Sealy Tarns! 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