Filter out these words

Kia ora,

One of the common comments I leave on manuscripts is, “You can cut out the filter words here.” Filter words tell us what you see, hear, taste, or think, rather than show us what you see, hear, taste, or think.

Check out this straightforward way of making your writing more immersive.

See you next week,

Deborah

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PS: last week I said I’d post that reel about why I’m leaving Insta. It’s done. Phew! Welcome to those of you who have joined the newsletter after watching the reel. Great to have you!

📚 What I’m reading

A Training School For Elephants, by Sophy Roberts.

What Happens if You Keep Going? by Tim Mathis.

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📅 Availability

Currently booking manuscripts from mid-May. If you’re thinking of getting your manuscript edited, do get in touch now to book your spot. 

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✍️ Ways to work with me

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