Kia ora, How many travel or adventure drafts do you have sitting unfinished? Those drafts could be blog posts or articles, or full manuscripts. Reply and let me know your number. I want to know, and I’m not judging. Cheers, Deborah P.S. Don’t like your number? Want help with those drafts? I can help. ReplyContinue reading “How many drafts do you have?”
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Metaphorical pickles
Kia ora, A pickle some travel and adventure writers get into is writing all about themselves. It’s easy to do because that’s the natural angle to take when you’re writing about your trip. Naturally, when you write about where you went, what you did, and how you got yourself out of different pickles, you writeContinue reading “Metaphorical pickles”
Being intentional with your words
Kia ora, I had a great weekend away at Arrowtown, just outside of Queenstown. A group of us heaved ourselves around the Sawpit Gully track. Steep on the way up, steep on the way down! The crisp, blue skies and autumn colours were just gorgeous. In last week’s email I talked about my dislike ofContinue reading “Being intentional with your words”
Tell me your opinion on this
Kia ora, I’m heading away this weekend, so I’m getting my gear together. Snacks are a key part of the day walk and tramping experience. My go-tos: One Square Meal bars (apricot or cranberry) and Whittaker’s Peanut Slabs. But I’ve got to tell you: I can’t do scroggin. Even if I lace it with M&Ms.Continue reading “Tell me your opinion on this”
I’m so inspired
Kia ora, A few weeks ago I sent an edit back to a new writer. I always find this to be a nail-biting experience. Will they like my edits? Will they find my suggestions helpful? Have I caught everything I can? My main goal is always to help writers bring out the best in theirContinue reading “I’m so inspired”
Celebrating writing wins
Last week I wrapped up a copyedit for a local writer. This was our fourth time working together. His first book all those years ago was great – strong opening chapter, well paced narrative, realistic characterisation. Even with that solid foundation, I made a lot of edits. He’d done all that solid work, so IContinue reading “Celebrating writing wins”
Cosy season & a question for you
Kia ora, I’ve had a busy week so far. Here’s a round up: Okay, over to you. What’s one thing you’re excited about as the seasons change? Reply and let me know! Until next time, stay warm (or cool, if you’re in the northern hemisphere). Deborah PS: Last week I finished reading What Happens ifContinue reading “Cosy season & a question for you”
Filter out these words
Kia ora, One of the common comments I leave on manuscripts is, “You can cut out the filter words here.” Filter words tell us what you see, hear, taste, or think, rather than show us what you see, hear, taste, or think. Check out this straightforward way of making your writing more immersive. See youContinue reading “Filter out these words”
Catching up on that to-do list
Kia ora, I’m catching up from my week away, hence why this week’s email is a little late. But you may have seen an email from me earlier in the week- my latest blog post, Writing a travel memoir can be cathartic. Check it out if you haven’t already, and let me know if itContinue reading “Catching up on that to-do list”
My recent favourites
Kia ora, I’m preparing for some much-needed time off, so this week I’m sharing a list of interesting links for you to check out. Okay. I’m going to log off. See you next week! Deborah PS. My out-of-office is on, so if you send me an email, I’ll check in when I turn my laptopContinue reading “My recent favourites”
Deborah Shaw Adventure Editing 