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Why “decide” weakens your writing (and how to fix it)

Is “decide” weakening your writing? This small word can slow pacing, strip emotional depth, and trap you in telling rather than showing. My latest blog post shows how focusing on actions, rather than decisions, creates more engaging scenes.

Celebrating writing wins

Last week I wrapped up a copyedit for a local writer. This was our fourth time working together. His first book all those years ago was great – strong opening chapter, well paced narrative, realistic characterisation. Even with that solid foundation, I made a lot of edits. He’d done all that solid work, so IContinue reading “Celebrating writing wins”

Filter out these words

Kia ora, One of the common comments I leave on manuscripts is, “You can cut out the filter words here.” Filter words tell us what you see, hear, taste, or think, rather than show us what you see, hear, taste, or think. Check out this straightforward way of making your writing more immersive. See youContinue reading “Filter out these words”

Writing a travel memoir can be cathartic

The travel and adventure genre has many sub genres, and one of the most challenging to write is memoir. Writing a memoir can be a kind of therapy or catharsis, and writing a memoir set around a trip you took adds another layer of complexity.

When the words won’t come easily

Kia ora Some days the words flow so smoothly that you’re convinced you can smash out your first draft by the end of the week. Some days the words come as easily as picking your way through a field of nettles. Or gorse. Or cow pats. (We’ve all been there.) When the words aren’t coming,Continue reading “When the words won’t come easily”

How to include flashbacks in your writing

Flashbacks send readers back in time to events that happened outside your story’s “present”. Knowing how to nudge your readers in the right direction will keep readers engaged, instead of having them go “huh?”

Quick writing wisdom: 3 tips

Kia ora, I missed writing last week’s email. I was on a tight deadline for my current edit, but it’s under control and I’m back in action. This week I want to give you three tips for your adventure writing. Do get help with your self-publishing project. You don’t have to do it all yourself.Continue reading “Quick writing wisdom: 3 tips”

Aligning our values

Kia ora, When it comes to working with writers, my biggest value is trust. You need to trust me with your manuscript, story, and vision. Sharing your work with someone can be a vulnerable experience, and that trust is not something I take lightly. That’s why I always ask to see your manuscript before weContinue reading “Aligning our values”